I've had an unusual amount of correspondence about the ending of my novel Falling Glass. I wouldn't say complaints as such but there have been quite a few people who have written and emailed me asking for a definite answer as to what I think happened at the very end. I don't normally like to dissect my own books or over analyse them, but just this once I felt I should clear up one or two issues about the ending. If you haven't read the book and you don't like spoilers you should stop reading right now.
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Ok if you're still with me I assume you've read the book or you don't mind the old spoiler or two...The first thing I'd like to make clear is that there will not be a sequel to Falling Glass. It's a standalone novel. We won't be seeing Killian ever again. The second thing I'd like to make clear is that this is the final appearance of Michael Forsythe. We won't be seeing him again either. With that in mind you should appreciate that the ending of Falling Glass is not supposed to be a cliff hanger. The story will not be continued in a subsequent book. It ends there for both characters.
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Ahh, that's all very well but what actually happens??!!! you want to know. Well the answer to that question is that I don't actually know. It's a little bit like Schrodinger's Cat: which exists in the quantum state both alive and dead until Professor Schrodinger opens the box. Michael Forsythe and Killian come from two different schools of thought and two different approaches to life. Killian uses words as weapons, Michael is no dummy but he is the embodiment of action. For Michael "the hand is the cutting edge of the mind" but for Killian resorting to violence is almost always a failure of method. Inevitably when these two characters meet we're going to want to know which philosophy triumphs. But of course there's no definitive answer. It's a question that's come up again and again throughout history and it has never been adequately resolved. What I prefer to do is push the characters into the final confrontation and leave them there in that strange quantum entangled world where neither one is the winner or the loser. I'm afraid that if you want a definitive answer as to what happens at the end of Falling Glass then you are going to have to pick a side for yourself. As for me, well, I choose not to.
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Hope that helps.
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I mentioned somewhere else that I really liked the ending to the book. I think that in many books the final confrontation falls short of the quality of the rest of the book, and every once in a while it's worth it just to leave it as-is.
I don't have the exact quote in front of me, but R.A. Lafferty once ended a book by saying "all stories are better without the first and last pages." While I wouldn't agree with the "all" (and maybe not even "many"), I think that there's something to it for some stories.
I really liked the ending. I figured the statement that "words . . . are deadlier by far than bullets in the hands of an expert practitioner" gives the edge to Killian, but I didn't really think it mattered (especially if neither character is returning in some form). The whole book was thougtful and provacative, without being blatant, so why shouldn't the ending be the same way. I thought it was great.
I leaned back in the deck chair and raised my ice filled glass of Boodles in a toast. "To endings, Meyer. To endings - whether they be the last page of a book or that last romp with the lovely lass when you and she both know its at the finish." The sun was a sad golden coin in the early April mist and the Busted Flush rocked sullenly in the north-running swell. From the corner of my eye I saw a flash of light immediately followed by the sound of falling glass. A man in a porkpie hat did a piruette and collaped - it was Killian!
BRIGHT WIND FROM MOUNTAIN
As you know, I thought the ending was stunningly great. Part of this was because the situation was so well set up. Even if you hadn't read the Dead trilogy, but especially if you had, the arrival of Michael Forsythe in Cambridge carries with it a kind of doom. You think, shit--this is how the story ends? But then we're reminded that Killian is a talker and has talked his way through difficult situations before. More, we've seen him do it. It isn't so much that it's likely that Killian will persuade Forsythe, it's more that we believe it is possible that gives the ending this kind of exhilerating uplift of hope.
Which is better than certainty any day.
Thank you for that. I'm glad/sad to know that we will not see Killian or Michael again....I won't be expecting them now. I decided on a (post)ending and I will be OK with losing touch with them. I loved both characters but I also loved Alex (HR) and I am anxious to read Fifty Grand. I'm hoping this female heroine will be as endearing. The audiobook is (finally) enroute.
Adrian please...more please ♥
I think the only thing about the ending that I might question is whether Forsythe would show up at all or if instead he would send someone.
My interpretation was that since Killian was a Tinker his people had an oral history rather than a written one. And that before he was to be killed by Forsythe he was telling his story and therefore contributing his history to the overall history of his people. He both dies and lives on.
For me, the ending of Falling Glass was as good as it gets. I can easily imagine the two protagonists sitting over drinks, reviewing what happened, The book starting with the last chapter and repeating. It is an appropriate and satisfactory ending for a novel of suspense. Mythic, in fact.
A perfect ending!
I liked the ending and certainly wasn't bothered in any way by it.
While I couldn't have articulated it the way you do in your post, I think that I basically understood it the way you've described it.
I did believe firmly that there was to be a sequel for Killian, so thanks for clearing up that misunderstanding!
I too think think the ending is perfect, although It took a bit for me to stop screaming about it to reach that conclusion. I am sad to hear there will be no more Killian however even though I guessed that was the case from some of your comments. I'm curious, what should we expect in the future?
Doyle thought he was killing off Holmes, too. If you don't bring these two guys back, I wouldn't mind seeing how you bring the two phiosophies into opposition in future stories -- the Way of the Warrior vs. the Way of the Yentah.
I must say that it probably took a bit of bravery on your part to make Forsythe the kind of character you made him in this book.
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Detectives Beyond Borders
"Because Murder Is More Fun Away From Home"
http://www.detectivesbeyondborders.blogspot.com
Mythic was what I thought as well, Michelle.
I may be naive, but I loved the dead series and Forsythe is one of my favorite fictional characters ever. He lived through some tough times, and committed some harsh acts, but he always seemed to have a good sense of what is right and wrong. Based on that alone, I think he had to let Killian live.
Gav
I remember watching In The Line of Fire and thinking wow this is a great story with great characters, I hope it doesnt come down to fisticuffs between the two leads at the end...
Gav
I remember watching In The Line of Fire and thinking wow this is a great story with great characters, I hope it doesnt come down to fisticuffs between the two leads at the end...
DJD
Its certainly a possibility. MF is a tough nut to crack but maybe Killian did it?
Bright Wind
I'd love to see Killian in a porkpie hat. In fact I'd love to see me in a porkpie hat. I wonder where I could get one in the land of corked cowboy hats?
Seana
I cant remember if I wrote the ending before the rest of the book but I certainly had it in mind the whole time. In particular that common in that village in that part of Cambridgeshire.
Trudy
Hopefully you'll like it. There is a Colorado link like in Hidden River, but there's also a lot of stuff about Cuba too. One of the Amazon reviewers accuses me of being a paid puppet of the Miami Cubans and says I never visited the paradise which is Castro's Cuba. I suspect HE's never actually visited Castro's Cuba because a couple of weeks in Havana quickly cures you of any illusions about the popularity and success of the Castro family dictatorship.
SJ
Yeah I think five years down the line MF wouldnt have cared but complacency hasnt quite got him yet.
Brian
I like that idea very much. And it ties into the idea that Ireland was a bardic culture until quite recently...
To become a member of the Fianna or the Knights of the Red Branch it was required that you recite thousand line poems flawlessly... while people threw spears at you.
Michelle
Yes and to make that cleart that this wasn't Killian's story or Michael's story I told it in third person narration. (Michael Forsythe of course is always first person).
Mike
Thanks man.
Speedskater
Did you ever see the film Excalibur? There's a bit where Arthur has Uriens down in the river at the point of a sword and offers him mercy if he'll swear allegiance to him. Uriens says a knight cant swear allegiance to a squire. Arthur thinks about that and agrees and says to Uriens that he must knight him first. He gives Uriens Excalibur and bends down in front of him. Uriens takes Excalibur. Around him his followers are yelling at him to chop Arthur's head off and he's holding the sword ready to kill him but completely amazed by Arthur's courage...
That moment was the mood that I was attempting to capture.
Glenna
Well there's a kids book coming out in October called Deviant which is what I'm calling a Young Adult noir - if indeed such a thing exists.
Its the third book in what I'm going to call just for you my Colorado trilogy, which is purely thematic or geographical or whatever...Hidden River, Fifty Grand and Deviant.
Peter
Doyle should have stuck with killing him. The later stories lack the frisson of the earlier ones. Although you cant tell that to the Holmes nuts.
Anon
Its certainly a possibility, although I think MF has gone to a lot of time and trouble just to let him off with a warning. But who knows? I dont.
I was thinking about Peter's point and have the sense that your fans have always been a bit softer on Michael Forsythe's shall we say 'shortcomings' than you have. But I think it does have somethinng to do with the first person Dead Trilogy. It's possible that we would still find him symapthetic here if seen from the inside of his own dark mind.
Seana
Yeah someone said that MF was surprisingly scary in Falling Glass and I think third person helps make him that way, that and not having him really appear until the end like the shark in Jaws.
I think it does have somethinng to do with the first person Dead Trilogy. It's possible that we would still find him symapthetic here if seen from the inside of his own dark mind.
Seana, I'm reading one of Bill James' non-Harpur and Iles novels. It's very much in the James vein of cross-talk, evasion and dark satire, but it's told in first person, unlike the H&I books, which are in third. This provides a laboratory for the question I ask in my current post: What difference does first-person make?
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"Because Murder Is More Fun Away From Home"
http://www.detectivesbeyondborders.blogspot.com/
Also, he's not a kid anymore. And he's a success story. Two things that of course turn us a bit against him.
Is this like the ending of the classic who's behind the door -- the lady or the tiger? Then the reader makes a guess, and lives with it.
Kathy
You might need to read the book to find out.
Adrian, sounds like a good excuse to reread Hidden Diver and Fifty Grand. Not that I need one...
Hidden Diver sounds good.
Sorry. I couldn't help myself.
Will look forward to Deviant. I'm not a young adult but I love noir. I'm expecting to enjoy the Colorado flavor.
Glenna
Yeah I've decided now the whole is going to be known as my Colorado trilogy:
Hidden River, Fifty Grand, Deviant
If'd I thought of this in advance I would have come up with a two word title for the last book and I probably wouldnt have made it a Y/A. Oh well...
Trudy
The whole thing takes place in the Springs with just a couple of scenes in Denver.
Had to stop reading the post, and don't want to read the comments because I am about half way through the novel. I love it so far and a review will certainly be coming once I finish. It will be interesting to revisit this post once I finish.
Another vote here for loving the ending. I loved the whole book, thought it was one of your best. Intentionally vague to avoid spoilers: When I first got to the part about the secret past shared by the antagonists involving video, I thought "oh no, not this again..." But as I read on it made sense, you made it work, and in fact it wasn't exactly the subject matter I thought it would be which is so often a cop out to stir up emotions against the "bad guys." One of the strengths of the novel is how well defined the reasons are for the actions taken by each character. Can't wait to see what you do next.
Seana, Hidden Diver.... The novella spinoff of Hidden River....or maybe not.
Hidden Driver, Hidden Liver, Hidden Shiver--the possibilities are endless!
Their lives depend on finding that last tiny slice of cake. It's Hidden Sliver.
They'd chosen an old, cheap, small car for their getaway, but when they burst out of the bank, it was nowhere to be seen. Read Hidden Flivver.
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Detectives Beyond Borders
"Because Murder Is More Fun Away From Home"
http://www.detectivesbeyondborders.blogspot.com/
Hidden Sliver would do better as the much protested sequel to Falling Glass.
Dennis
Yeah its based on a real case that was hushed up in Belfast called the Kincora Boys Home scandal
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Kincora_Boys'_Home
but rather than just have the bad guys be evil I thought I'd at least try to give them justifications. Give them a fighting chance to convince Killian...
Adrian- Just finishes FG one minute ago, and went right back to this post to read the rest of your post and the other's comments. Caught on to the Kinkora scandal right off. As I'm sure others might have thought, the ending left me feeling like there would be more to come, but your post clarified that. Now, knowing it is the end of the road for both MF and Killian, it is a pefect ending! Great novel, I loved it.
I love your books. Read this one right after I finished the Dead trilogy. That's what I don't get about this ending. I thought Michael would have investigated the whole fetid underage sex film angle much more thoroughly before he came to off his protege on the basis of some code of honor. In Bloomsday, he was sickened by the idea of pedophiles. Why would he, a Dad now, decide that this Coulter character was pure as the driven snow with no investigation? Hubris? I guess I thought he had matured during Bloomsday. The ending is gorgeous, but it just didn't feel true to me with the characters. So yeah, I was a bit disappointed.
I love your books. Read this one right after I finished the Dead trilogy. That's what I don't get about this ending. I thought Michael would have investigated the whole fetid underage sex film angle much more thoroughly before he came to off his protege on the basis of some code of honor. In Bloomsday, he was sickened by the idea of pedophiles. Why would he, a Dad now, decide that this Coulter character was pure as the driven snow with no investigation? Hubris? I guess I thought he had matured during Bloomsday. The ending is gorgeous, but it just didn't feel true to me with the characters. So yeah, I was a bit disappointed.
Anon
It wasnt about maturity or being a dad or Coulter's character or anything like that.
It was about Michael and Killian's notions of honour.
Like several others here, I just finished FG about 5 minutes ago, came straight to this post that I knew existed (and now understand why) and started reading. I have read the Dead Trilogy (and now FG) over the past 10 days, and like others, I found MF changed in this last book.
I think the notion of not being in his head makes sense, and that could be part of my struggle. I can't help that the dumb, girly part of me just wants to scream out "What happened to Peru???" The minute they reference him as being in Park Slope, my heart just sunk a little. And like a previous poster, I did feel like after his own revelation regarding his daughter, and the fears he'd had for her well-being (feelings that developed before he knew he was the father - meaning he was able to feel protective of children) it wasn't really "honor" that would have found him sitting in that chair, finishing the short story, and waiting for Killian.
It seemed to me that the concept in this book was that despite whatever better angels Michael may have had, the sum of his parts resulted in him backsliding into this life; a life that would drive him to shoot Killian for the sole purpose of saving face for business, not honor. It was disappointing to learn that the plans for a better life were so short lived. I know that's far more true to life, which I do admire so much with your books, but it's still a hard pill to swallow.
Well... I'm off to begin The Cold Cold Ground. Four quick things to note before I go:
1. Thank you for these amazing books. They are some of best I've read in a very long time.
2. I do audible - don't ever loose Gerard Doyle if you can help it - wow.
3. Are you aware that on Audible there is no summary at all on Cold Cold Ground? Just a bio of you. Not one word on the book. Not sure if you can get that fixed, but if it were the first book of yours I had come across, I probably would have passed if I hadn't been able to get at least a little idea of a plot.
4. Please tell me that Sirens in the Street will be offered on Audible; it's not listed yet in the "coming soon" section for pre-sale, even though the paperback and kindle versions are on Amazon.
Again, thanks for your books - they are most certainly a gift. I promise not all Americans are disinterested in quality writing.
Amanda
thank you so much for the kind email. although as you see from this comment thread I cant fill you in on the rest of the info I can assure you about one thing and that is Doyle. In a couple of weeks we'll be getting together for one of our long skype sessions where we hash out how to do the audio version of the books. Ger will be doing the audio of Duffy #2 and if I ever get round to finishing it Duffy #3.
thanks again.
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