Thursday, August 25, 2011
David Foster Wallace - The Pale King
I took David Foster Wallace’s unfinished novel The Pale King with me on my big recent plane journey. The book was as beautiful, infuriating, intelligent, lyrical and annoying as its first paragraph, below:
Past the flannel plains and blacktop graphs and skylines of canted rust, and past the tobacco-brown river overhung with weeping trees and coins of sunlight through them on the water downriver, to the place beyond the windbreak, where untilled fields shimmer shrilly in the A.M. heat: shattercane, lamb’s quarter, cutgrass, sawbrier, nutgrass, goldenrod, creeping charlie, butter print, nightshade, ragweed, wild oat, vetch, butcher grass, invaginate volunteer beans, all heads gently noddding in a morning breeze like a mother’s soft hand on your cheek. An arrow of starlings fired from the windbreaks sunflower, four more, one bowed and horses in the distance standing rigid as still as toys. All nodding. Electric sounds of insects at their business. Ale colored sunshine and pale sky and whorls of cirrus so high they cast no shadow. Insects all business all the time. Quartz and chert and schist and chondrite iron scabs in granite. Very old land. Look around you. The horizon trembling, shapeless. We are all of us brothers.
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That's really interesting stuff. "Arrow of starlings" is great. So is "horses in the distance standing rigid as still as toys."
I've been afraid to read that book after I tried, and failed, to get through "Infinite Jest."
Did you see this?
http://video.nytimes.com/video/2011/08/22/arts/music/100000001008114/calamity-song-by-the-decemberists.html
Speedsakter
It was sometimes a slog.
I hadnt seen that, but I've only lately discovered the Decemberists. They seem to have a fixation with Northern Ireland which is quite interesting considering they are from Oregon.
I definitely agree it's annoying. A laundry list of nouns doesn't count as good description, especially when some of them (sawbrier? chondrite?) are bound to be meaningless to most readers. There are one or two good bits (ale-colored sunshine), but they're buried under a lot of dross. This boy needs an editor. I recently read a novel set in Sri Lanka called The Sweet and Simple Kind by Yasmine Gooneratne that had a sentence that's almost a lesson in how to create an evocative, lyrical and poetic descriptive passage. Here she is describing a tea plantation in Sri Lanka:
"When the wreaths of mist lift, leaving the grass wet with dew, mornings on the estate clink and ring with birdsong, sounding very much as if a crowd of children were jingling thin silver coins in their pockets, considering the possibilities."
Pretty good stuff. Gooneratne doesn't go overboard on description like Wallace, but when she turns her hand to it she makes it count. Here's a link to a review of the novel on my blog, JettisonCocoon.com http://www.jettisoncocoon.com/2011/07/book-review-sweet-and-simple-kind-2006.html
Cary
Thats a beautiful sentence in the Sri Lanka novel, really quite lovely.
I have to say though that I am a sucker for the sentences with the lots of nouns...but I like you did begin to feel a bit defeated by the sheer number of them.
The picture incidentally is of goldenrod which is a bit more weedy than I was expecting.
How do writers manage to take in all the essential details of a given scene? Are they able to take in an entire scene in an instant?Do writers have photographic memory?
Anon
I think not. I think for Foster Wallace he must have had an initial impression and then as he worked on the scene he remembered more and more...
Cary
Before I forget, the editor's note on the book shows that he did quite a lot of editing on the novel, some of it to me at least pretty invasive and controversial. Its impossible to know how much of that opening para Foster Wallace would have kept if he hadnt killed himself.
Adrian
I enjoyed Michael Forsythe's descriptions of Belfast in "The Bloomsday Dead". If I could write descriptive prose half as good as that, I could die happy.
Anon
And if I could write similes as good as Raymond Chandler (or anything as good as Raymond Chandler) I'd die happy!
I haven't read Raymond Chandler yet, but Eoin McNamee is another writer I admire.
Anon
I know Eoin a little bit. He's a good guy. And a terrific writer.
On a hot morning in the Midwest, surrounded by the stark beauty of nature forged over eons, it became clear we are all brothers.
Someone should publish a plain English interpretation of this novel for the rest of us.
I have to read his sentences and paragraphs several times to come close to any comprehension.
Lew
It aint Dashiell Hammett is it? But I suppose it also depends on what you want a novel to do. If you just want to hear the story DFW is going to piss you off mightily but if you're interested in arresting, often challenging prose then I think you'll like the book, although it should be stressed that Infinite Jest remains DFW's masterpiece by a LONG way.
I bought the book, but have yet to read it. It's a bit of a Catch 22, isn't it? You can't judge it on it's merits, because you don't know if it's the book Wallace would have allowed to see the light of day if he were still around.
I think it's one of those things where you have to just look at it and see what if anything you can get from it without judging it.
Not that you can't judge the decisions to publish it. You can.
Seana
The editorial decisions were VERY strange. Whole sections were lifted and pasted around. This is very much the editor's book whoever he was.
I liked what I read on the whole, but DFW would not have been very pleased to foist this text on the public. I guess thats one of the reasons why you shouldnt hang yourself.
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I suppose you can never entirely rule out suicide, but hanging would not be my ending of choice.
Too many words is DFW's style, I don't think his books would be the same without the excessive details and constant side trips. Having a great sense of humor helps keep those sections from getting tedious. I loved Infinite Jest but the Canadian revolutionary sections were the parts that got old quick, and they were the least funny...
I’m not sure “flannel plains” is all that good, beyond the sonic novelty of flannel.
I once read an assessment of David Foster Wallace that reminded of an old television commercial for I forget which product, a cigarette, maybe: “Infinite Jest. It’s not readable. But then, it doesn’t try to be.”
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Seana
Its a terrible way to go. Especially the way most amateurs do it.
Dennis
Yes indeed. The good thing is that you'll know whether you can cope with it very quickly and can therefore give up.
Peter
Infinite Jest is still worth the effort though. Life is short but I still think its worth the effort.
I have read one of his essays, and he know he has a great way of analyzing a phenomenon, in this case the paths of tennis balls through the air on a court. I know the guy was sharp.
Peter
I love this piece he did for, ahem, Gourmet Magazine
Probably should have linked to this in the body of the post but anyway this is a fascinating BBC Radio 3 documentary on DFW from about six months ago that someone has uploaded onto youtube:
David Foster Wallace
Thanks. I'm printing it out as we speak.
Gourmet, you said? Lifestyle is your middle name, man.
I have tried several times to tackle DFWs infinite jest unsuccessfully. His Essay on Cruise Liners and another on The Indiana State Fair are far more accessible and eye gougingly funny. Foreboding too how he mentions the suicidal draw of the ocean late at night and the despair he feels from it in A Supoosedly Fun Thing I will Never Do Again. I took a cruise after reading it yet before Foster killed himself and I almost get what he was driving at but I think the profundity of his depression revealed it to him in a way I simply didnt share. I experienced an atypical feeling of agoraphobia and another of my cosmic insignificance but suicidal ? I really didnt catch the vibe as he did. Tragic loss of an incredibly complex member of the class of 1961, my own btw.
Rastamick
I'm not sure what it says about me but I feel the same thing high up on ships. The lure of the wake is almost irresistible.
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