Tuesday, November 22, 2011

This Aint Lite FM: The Cold Cold Ground - Page 1

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The riot had taken on a beauty of its own now. Arcs of gasoline fire under the crescent moon. Crimson tracer in mystical parabolas. Phosphorescence from the barrels of plastic bullet guns. A distant yelling like that of men below decks in a torpedoed prison ship. The scarlet whoosh of Molotovs intersecting with exacting surfaces. Helicopters everywhere: their spotlights finding one another like lovers in the Afterlife.
        I watched with the others by the Land Rover on Knockagh Mountain. No one spoke. Words were inadequate. You needed a Picasso for this scene, not a poet.
        The police and the rioters were arranged in two ragged fronts that ran across a dozen streets, the opposing sides illuminated by the flash of newsmen’s cameras and the burning, petrol-filled milk bottles sent tumbling across the no man’s land like votive offerings to the god of curves.
        Sometimes one side charged and the two lines touched for a time before decoupling and returning to their original positions.
        The smell was the stench of civilization: gunpowder, cordite, slow match, kerosene.
        It was perfect.
        It was Giselle.
        It was Swan Lake.
        And yet. . .
        And yet we had the feeling that we had seen better.
        In fact we had seen better only last week when, in the hospital wing of The Maze Prison, IRA commander Bobby Sands had finally popped his clogs.
        Bobby was a local lad from Newtownabbey and a poster boy for the movement having never killed anyone and coming from a mixed Protestant-Catholic background. And bearded, he was a good Jesus, which didn’t hurt either.
        Bobby Sands was the maitreya, the world teacher, the martyr who would redeem mankind through his suffering.
        When Bobby finally died on the sixty sixth day of his hunger strike the Catholic portions of the city had erupted with spontaneous anger and frustration.
        But that was a week ago and Frankie Hughes, the second hunger striker to die, had none of Bobby’s advantages. No one thought Frankie was Jesus. Frankie enjoyed killing and was very good at it. Frankie shed no tears over dead children. Not even for the cameras.
        And the riots for his death felt somewhat. . .orchestrated.
        Perhaps on the ground it seemed like the same chaos and maybe that’s what they would print tomorrow in newspapers from Boston to Beijing. . .But up here on the Knockagh it was obvious that the peelers had the upper hand. The rioters had been cornered into a small western portion of the city between the hills and the Protestant estates. They faced a thousand full time peelers, plus two or three hundred police reserve, another two hundred UDR and a battalion strength unit of British Army regulars in close support. There were hundreds of rioters - not the thousands that had been predicted: this hardly represented a general uprising of even the Catholic population and as for the promised “revolution” . . . well, not tonight.

83 comments:

Frankie said...

You were trying to think of a name for an evil, murdering bastard who doesn't cry over dead children, and you thought of Frankie did ya? or was he real? like Bobby Sands.

Sean Patrick Reardon said...

So good. Cannot wait to read this!

speedskater42k said...

Looking forward to getting your book!

seana said...

Great idea to put it up here, although the first sentence running down the side of the picture is a little awkward.

I love that whole "And yet we had seen better" aspect to this.

DJD said...

I'm in. Looks good. Anxious to read the rest. Any more news on availability in the U.S.?

Shelly Smith said...

Completely lovely. I can't wait until January. Nothing makes me happier than the juxtaposition of poetry and cynicism.

On a slightly related note, I was delighted by Bruen's shout out to Fifty Grand in Headstone. Maybe American publishers will listen to him...

Anonymous said...

This book's gonna be great. Can't wait for my copy in the mail. Meanwhile I wonder:
Did the paramilitaries deserve POW status?
Did the IRA keep killing security officers during the hunger strikes?
Was Lenny Murphy still at large?
Were any church leaders, from anywhere, at all helpful during those times?
Could PM Thatcher have behaved any differently? Did she have any integrity, or did she
allow the scandals and abuses later exposed by the Irish media to happen?

adrian mckinty said...

Frankie

No, Frankie Hughes was a real dude.

adrian mckinty said...

Sean

I think you'll like it.

adrian mckinty said...

Speedskater

Well, you wont have to wait long old chum.

adrian mckinty said...

Seana

You may have browser issues. Works ok in chrome and explorer. But maybe not, and anyway its the words that count.

adrian mckinty said...

DJD

Yes, it wont be available except in audio format. Dont ask me why, thats US publishers for you.

adrian mckinty said...

Shelly

"Nothing makes me happier than the juxtaposition of poetry and cynicism."

Thats exactly what I'm trying to do here. Its fun isnt it?

adrian mckinty said...

Anon

ALL of those questions will be answered in the book, I promise. It isnt a political tract or a didactic novel by any means (I hate that stuff) but it does explore some of these issues.

adrian mckinty said...

Anon

Actually I meant to say ALL of these issues.

Ali said...

Anymore quotes as we get closer to the release date?

adrian mckinty said...

Ali

No, I dont think so. Its a big hassle. Blogger messes up my formatting and I have to go in there and fix it line by line. Its just too tedious.

seana said...

You're right, it looks good on my work one, which is ironic, as this one is older than old.

Shelly Smith said...

Maybe Blogger is just having a bad day. It wouldn't let me post with my Shullamuth openid, which is why today I'm Shelly:).

adrian mckinty said...

Seana, Shulla

Thats why I told Ali that this is going to be the only extract. Blogger is a BIG hassle when I've cut and paste anything from Word. Its always messed up the tabs and hard breaks. So annoying.

Dan said...

captivating stuff my man...do like the historical context it is framed in and love the switch from the minutiae of the molotovs impacting on cold hard ground and the revolt after the hunger strikers deaths...nice touch

seana said...

The teaser is all you really need to give us here anyway.

adrian mckinty said...

Dan


The thing is its a story about characters in extremis, its not a tract about the politics of the time. However these characters do live and breathe in extraordinary circumstances so there were will be some context throughout the book.

adrian mckinty said...

Seana

Well I would have liked some funny stuff or the odd bit of wit but like I say its too annoying to transpose from word or even a PDF.

seana said...

I think there's enough wit there for the flavor of it.

John McFetridge said...

And it really keeps getting better for the whole book.

Paul said...

Looks good and looking forward to reading it.
Anon- None of the paramilitaries deserved the so called POW status and yes attempts were made to kill police,army,etc.Lenny Murphy may have been inside at the time and unfortunately wasn't kept there.
I hardly saw my dad at the time he was working so much overtime and I think my mum was worried sick.On the other hand we did get a new car,and a down-payment on a new house.
Did you speak to any police officers etc for research Adrian?

Glenna said...

American publishers need a good kick in the hind in if you ask me. I'm glad it'll be available in audio at least.

Peter Rozovsky said...

And yet. . .

And yet we had the feeling that we had seen better.
...

"But that was a week ago and Frankie Hughes, the second hunger striker to die, had none of Bobby’s advantages. No one thought Frankie was Jesus. Frankie enjoyed killing and was very good at it. Frankie shed no tears over dead children. Not even for the cameras.
And the riots for his death felt somewhat. . .orchestrated."


That's one of my favorite bits in all of crime writing. It hits as hard as the hardest noir. The only thing that will stop this from being one of my favorite books of 2011 is that it won't be published until 2012.
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Detectives Beyond Borders
"Because Murder Is More Fun Away From Home
http://www.detectivesbeyondborders.blogspot.com/

Anonymous said...

DJD
Try ordering it from The Book Depository. That's what I did.

Frankie said...

I just read a review of Deviant. Did you really write about people killing gods/natures perfect creatures? Yikes! If I can get past that I may give this one a go.

adrian mckinty said...

John

Well it does get a bit funnier before it gets quite a bit darker.

adrian mckinty said...

Paul

Indeed I did. Talked to peelers, squaddies and hoods from both sides.

I wasn't that worried about verisimilitude though, its a novel not a history book, but I think you'll recognise many of the major "characters" and pretty much all the events. And you dont have to exaggerate or compress events too much to give people a real flavour of the time.

adrian mckinty said...

Glenna

Its just the dollars really isn't it? The dollars and cowardice.

adrian mckinty said...

Peter

You and Ken Bruen apparently.

Anyway glad you liked it. I have a feeling it wont be getting a US release any time soon.

adrian mckinty said...

Anon

Didnt know you could do that yet you sneaky devil you.

adrian mckinty said...

Frankie

Yup. Bad people doing bad things, based on a true story in Denver. Although in Denver it may have been a coyote, no one knows for sure.

Don't read Jonathan Franzen's Freedom, BTW, the ending will disturb you.

Frankie said...

You know what I'd do to someone who hurt gods perfect creatures? it would make any crime novelist's torture scenes look like a cake making morning at the WI.

adrian mckinty said...

Frankie

You'd even do it to the coyote?

Ali said...

Have you tried google document?

seana said...

Ali really wants another slice of this, apparently.

Good sign.

Peter Rozovsky said...

Ali has just come skulking around my place in search of quotes from the book...willing to sit back and watch a book dismembered, words and sentences stripped screaming from the whole!

Kate said...

Paul
I'm sorry for what your family and other families in NI went through. I'm sorry if I upset you with my questions.

adrian mckinty said...

Ali

Never heard of it.

You'd think that Word and Blogger would be compatible but they aren't. Not really. Just enough to drive you crazy actually.

adrian mckinty said...

Seana

He's going to have to get the book or look at the Look Inside thing on Amazon because I cant figure out how to post longer excerpts here without a huge amount of annoyance to me.

seana said...

Peter, you can't blame the guy. He can't get the actual book until January. He's living on crumbs here.

adrian mckinty said...

Peter

Indeed. I wonder which writers survive best out of context. For my money its probably Oscar Wilde or Gore Vidal or possibly JG Ballard.

adrian mckinty said...

Kate

I dont speak for Paul but I do think that there are no such things as stupid questions only stupid answers. And I stick by what I said, Cold Cold Ground will answer many of your questions.

seana said...

Joyce is good sometimes. Sometimes better than in context, actually.

adrian mckinty said...

Seana

Yes.

Three quarks for muster mark being a good example.

Anonymous said...

Its funny that the picture you usee to illustrate this piece is from THIS summer.

adrian mckinty said...

Anon

Plus ca change, eh?

Frankie said...

Im not beyond torturing a coyote.(i had to look up what one was) If you think clockwork orange style Id use matchsticks to keep his eyes open and offer him a programme of attitude re-adjustment with the aid of a KFC Bargain bucket. I wouldnt bother with an ASBO, Coyotes see them as badgers of honour.

Paul said...

No need to apologise Kate,its just the way it was and still is to some extent.You learn to live with it.

John McFetridge said...

Plus ca change, eh. It is interesting. I'm currently researching Montreal in 1970 and a headline in the paper that summer said, "Ireland on the Brink of Civil War." The paper didn't exactly ignore all the bombs going off in Montreal but they seemed downplayed and they seemed genuinely surprised by the kidnappings that October.

To this day people argue about the War Meaures Act - the army was called in for about 90 days to free up the police to investigate the kidnappings. And then that was it. One kidnap victim murdered, the other released and the kidnappers off to Cuba.

Some people, of course, are angry that no one served much in the way of a prison sentence (I think fourteen years was the longest) for the years of bombings, armed robberies, kidnappings and murders (people often say that only about eight people were killed, as if there's some acceptable number of murder victims) but the actions ended in 1970.

Oh, the politics continue to this day.

When I ask people what was the difference, why didn't the terrorism continue in Quebec I'm told it's because it never had popular support and there were other, legal, means of addressing issues.

I don't know, maybe the velvet glove was thick enough.

Kate said...

Paul and Adrian
Thanks for responding, and for being understanding.
In '81, I thought Sands and the PM were holding fast to deeply held beliefs. Since then, it seems like the more I learn about NI, the less I understand.
NI's a complicated place, but I love the times I spent there.

adrian mckinty said...

Frankie

Havent you seen the Road Runner cartoons?

adrian mckinty said...

John

I wonder what would have happened if Quebec had seceded during the Cold War. Would the Americans have tolerated a Catholic anti US Republic allied with a decidedly independent non NATO France.

adrian mckinty said...

Kate


Sands and Thatcher was the first of a series of such clashes in the 80's. Galtieri and Thatcher. Scargill and Thatcher. It was an interesting time.

I do touch on some of this in the book.

Anonymous said...

Adrian

I look forward to your insights into Mrs. Thatcher. I don't know much about her, or about politics in general. So far, she strikes me as interesting and intelligent but maybe a little unimaginative. Meryl Streep will probably play her perfectly in the upcoming movie.

seana said...

I'm looking forward to reading that Montreal novel, John, whenever you bring it out. Although it's about Toronto and not Quebec, I'm in the middle of Everybody Knows This Is Nowhere and really liking it. I'm at the part where one of the characters is thinking about all the cities around the Great Lakes as being reall one big city,irrespective of national borders and I like that image.

Of course, I think the character is really thinking about them all being one big market to move drugs through, but the idea has wider applications.

Kate said...

John Mc and Peter R.

Do you know the name or book titles of a Canadian crime writer who sets her novels in Quebec province?

Peter Rozovsky said...

Kate, if you haven’t heard from John already, Louise Penny and Giles Blunt come to mind, as does David Montrose, who wrote in the 1950s. Montreal is a kind of lingering presence in John’s novels, and he has written short fiction set in Montreal in the 1940s that may be available on his site.
======================
Detectives Beyond Borders
"Because Murder Is More Fun Away From Home
http://www.detectivesbeyondborders.blogspot.com/

Peter Rozovsky said...

Seana, yes, the idea does have big implications. The "beyond borders" aspect, the idea of a transnational illicit economy, always interests me when I find it crime fiction, whether in John's, or in Anders Roslund's and Börge Hellström's. ======================
Detectives Beyond Borders
"Because Murder Is More Fun Away From Home
http://www.detectivesbeyondborders.blogspot.com/

Frankie said...

Thatcher was evil. Her legacy is dismantling all that was good about Britain and we will never recover. In her favour she did have a bigger set of bollox than any male politicians. I'd also bet on her to win a game of battleships. This opinion has been passed down to me as I don't really remember her or for that matter cartoon coyotes..hmmm

Kate said...

Frankie

I wouldn't be surprised if Mrs. Thatcher was in fact evil; I'm still pretty interested in what made her tick.

adrian mckinty said...

Frankie

Thatcher wasn't evil. I can think of very few living people who I would classify as actually evil...except Bono of course.

seana said...

Poor Bono. I don't think he's evil either, but full of hubris, yes.

seana said...

It's the juxtaposition of the cows and the Molotov cocktails that really makes the book stand out for me.

Uh, not that they're in the same scene or anything. Or I don't think they are.

adrian mckinty said...

Seana

Are you sure you meant to post that comment here?

seana said...

I'm sure I didn't. I guess these folks are just going to have to figure out what book I'm talking about. On the other hand, they could go here.

Easier for me, really.

adrian mckinty said...

Seana

According to The Simpsons only two men ever have had the evil gene Hitler and Walt Disney. But I wonder if Bono's taken a DNA test.

adrian mckinty said...

Frankie

You cant be serious. I'll let the Mrs Thatcher comment slide but how can you not have heard of the Road Runner cartoons?

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1YOj8WFY8H4&feature=related

seana said...

The Simpsons had him on the show, though. They must not think he's that evil.

I'm not sure about Disney. I went to the Disney museum in the Presidio last holiday season,and I have to admit it was pretty fascinating.

Kate said...

Peter

Thanks for providing me with the names of Canadian crime writers!

adrian mckinty said...

Kate

Check out Peter's blog why dont you:

Detectives Beyond Borders

for many suggestions on crime novelists from literally every continent on Earth.

Actually check that. I'm not sure he's had an Antarctica novel on there.

Frankie said...

You can be a bit evil you know. Semi-evil, quasi-evil, the margarine of evil, Diet Coke of evil. Just one calorie, not evil enough.

Anyway that Coyote is a miserable excuse for a meat eater, skinny!
Pink Panther cartoon are really good. Have you seen those?

Peter Rozovsky said...

Thanks for the plug. I've mentioned an Antarctica novel or two in passing in noting that I had never mentioned an Antarctica novel.
======================
Detectives Beyond Borders
"Because Murder Is More Fun Away From Home
http://www.detectivesbeyondborders.blogspot.com/

John McFetridge said...

If someone was inclined to write an Antarctica mystery, this could be a jumping off point:

http://news.google.com/newspapers?id=p4o0AAAAIBAJ&sjid=vaAFAAAAIBAJ&pg=3474%2C1003534

Although it's actually Arctic.

Peter Rozovsky said...

That's it! Base your novel on a true story, but switch poles so you can deny everything!

seana said...

Well? Was it ever resolved?That article is from 1970.

John McFetridge said...

Hey Seana, looks like it was resolved a few days later:

http://news.google.com/newspapers?id=q4o0AAAAIBAJ&sjid=vaAFAAAAIBAJ&pg=845%2C4770454

It's interesting, that kind of thing may come up again as the arctic opens up.

seana said...

That was an interesting article, John, and yet also sort of hilarious.

I guess it's what happens when abstract law meets up with how life is lived on the ground. Or in this case, on floating ice islands.